Operation SERF

 

Part 9

 

By Chris Sullins (February 3, 2009)

 

Daniel Shroud startled from sleep and into a sitting position in bed.  For a moment in the darkness a few more images raced through his mind.  He saw the eyes and moving jaw of the man who looked up at him in the tavern, the man beside the vehicle whose face disappeared, and the other man who also stared directly into his crosshairs.  The abstract gray images of the nightmare faded but were quickly replaced by the fresh and accurate memories of walking up to the each of the bodies in the snow outside of Browning’s home. 

 

Bright blood contrasted sharply against the neutral white background of the snow.  It remained red in the center, but discolored at the edges where it seemed to be lost among the individual ice crystals.  More blood was painted haphazardly as darker patches which were out of place on the men’s gray clothing.  Smaller amounts of blood were flicked across glass, vehicle panels, and weapons.  Each droplet sticking to these man-made surfaces glistened like an uncut ruby that seemed to have been worn smooth by the water of a river. 

 

Daniel remembered how he had used his thumbnail and scratched off a larger frozen bead of crimson from the grip of one of the rifles.  He had thought for a moment about how quickly the smaller amounts of fluid had frozen compare to the residual pliability of the bodies as he turned them over and searched for more gear.  It hadn’t bothered him at the time to touch them. 

 

Daniel recalled how he had effortlessly shifted in his thoughts and feelings yesterday.  He did not recall any particular difficulty as he seemed to cycle through each stage.  He had gone from a calm placid focus during the actual engagement, to a short adrenaline rush as he approached and searched the bodies which lasted only a few minutes, to a final flat detachment for the rest of the day.  He hadn’t felt physically nauseous like he had during the previous encounter after he killed his first man and watched the other one drown not long after.

 

His wife Tara and his son Isaac who slept between them on the same bed hadn’t stirred despite Daniel rousing from sleep.  He could hear their breathing had not changed.  Daniel glanced at the night winter sky through the window and given the stillness both indoors and out, he guessed it was still the very early morning.  He slid out from under the covers and was immediately met by the chill air of the room.  Daniel quietly slipped on some pants and a pair of moccasins to add to the shirt and knit cap he had already worn to bed earlier.

 

Daniel stepped out the bedroom door into the hallway which was across from his father’s bedroom.  Both rooms were on the second floor loft area and behind a landing and balcony that looked over the great room below.  He walked down the stairs and looked at the woodstove.  He could see through the glass that some bright orange coals had still survived from the last log of the night.   Daniel felt quite a bit of heat as he opened the door and carefully put another log at the edge of one large coal and closed the door.

 

He guessed the Frenchmen were still asleep in the guest bedroom adjacent to the kitchen, storage, and mud rooms at the back of the first floor.  There was enough split wood left next to the woodstove that he wouldn’t have to go to the back for more and possibly disturb them.  Daniel rested sideways across the couch and a few minutes later he watched a new flame move along the log inside the woodstove.  He hoped he might get some more rest before sunup. 

 

It had seemed to Daniel that he had no more than closed his eyes before his father woke him and sat down on the chair next to the couch.  The morning light was illuminating the room through the windows.  His father had a coffee mug in his one hand and rested it on the arm of his chair.

 

“I already made some coffee on the back stove if you want some,” Josiah said before he took a sip.  “The Frenchmen got theirs, some bacon, and left already with Kevin.  They’re all going ice-fishing this morning so we can have a meeting before the funeral today.  I didn’t really want the two of them around for that.”

 

Daniel sat up and rubbed his eyes.  He had probably dozed off a couple more hours before he awoke, but he didn’t feel any more rested.  The room was quite a bit warmer and he saw a couple more logs had been added inside the stove and were at full flame.

 

“So other than Browning leaving for Grayling,” began Josiah, “you’re sure the other officers are in?”

 

“Yes,” replied Daniel.  “They’ll be out of uniform at the meeting, but back in uniform at the post.  Everyone there will still know it’s them, of course.  I don’t know why they’re even bothering to go through the motions now.”

 

“We still need a law enforcement presence here as a symbol and for its use as its intended tool in our community,” stated Josiah.  “At the same time, people here need to know that those officers stand with them when outsiders come in and disregard our basic human rights.  Those officers may also be the first ones any outsiders –good, bad, or neutral— are going to want to deal with first when they come to visit.  At least, I hope their uniform still means something when it comes to possible negotiations in the future.”

 

“Do you seriously think the next group of grays who come here are going to want to negotiate with anyone living here?” asked Daniel.

 

“No, not them, not in the slightest,” answered Josiah.  “But, we need a semblance of civil order when it comes to the state government and even our neighbors in the surrounding counties.  If we’re perceived to be nothing more than a bunch of bandits on snowmobiles, then we won’t have much legitimacy with anyone.  We’ll be seen by all outsiders as being the same as Somali pirates.  We’ve had thirty years of propaganda where armed local citizens who get together for even a just cause and call themselves a militia would still been branded in the media as a terrorist cell.  However, we still have to prepare for this like it’s going to be a war to defend our homes and property.”

 

“Dad, what are you suggesting?” questioned Daniel.  “Because it still sounds like you’re looking for a militia without saying we are one.  A handful of state troopers aren’t going to be able to stop anyone from the outside either.  They didn’t even have their gate closed yesterday.  We’re the ones who’ve been protecting the people here.”

 

“I think the troopers and everyone else around here are beginning to awaken,” said Josiah.  “The reality has been that there is a plan to remove us.  Until recently this plan has used mostly passive and indirect means to push us out.  Those of us who remained here have felt its effects.  Up till now this effort on the part of the planners was mostly symbolic and without real force –without the possibility of shedding blood— and used our own perceived lack of control against us. 

 

“In the past when the federal and state government was really unwilling or incapable of following through on using physical violence as a consequence, it was the conditioned and residual fear of such consequences from an authority figure that acted as a powerful force alone in the minds of most people.  But just like the story of the people in Plato’s cave, these things were just shadow and illusion.  We, too, were prisoners in our own minds until we freed ourselves over the past decade.  We can’t return to that place.”

 

“Yes, I remember Plato’s allegory of the cave,” said Daniel.

 

“The powers that be know this.  They have always been the ones behind the backs of the people, maintaining the fire and directing the line of objects casting the shadows on the wall.  They know that they’ve already lost the capability to completely control things like they use to.  The fuel for the biggest fire for controlling the largest number of people in human history is running out.  The powers have known this for many years.  When those powers saw that the illusion had the potential of breaking for too many people all at once, then those same powers tried to change the peoples’ sense of what is reality again. 

 

“In order for them to retain and control the people who’ve already entered into the new false construct, they can’t leave even the smallest sliver of separate consciousness operating outside of it.  Such a contrast in perception would always present potential competition to their worldview and possibly break the mass illusion again in the future.  We have left that cave.  But, we are a small number and most people have not.”

 

“What can we do about the people who haven’t left?” asked Daniel.

 

“I don’t know how much we can do for them,” said Josiah.  “Many of them want to live in darkness and they’d rather have the illusion.  I had hoped that the ones in power would be content in controlling those easily fooled people, but the nature of those who seek power in the first place is that they are never satisfied with what they have –they always want more.  At some point when it is resource-effective for them to expand, then those with power will use force.  They always do.

 

“We’ve entered that stage now where there will be more people sent here to use deadly force against us.  They have superior force multiplication compared to us even though they, too, are few in living number.  They will seek to divide and conquer us and eliminate us in smaller numbers –preferably one at a time.  As human beings we have the right to resist them.  This is our home.  Besides, there really is nowhere left for us to go. 

 

“I know this might sound bad at first, but if we dig in now and make it too tough a fight for them here, then they will move on to someplace else that’s easier for them to oppress.  But, if other people in many places learn a lesson from our struggle and give them the same kind of fight at the same time, then those men in gray, and more importantly the people in power who sent them here in the first place will not prevail anywhere.  If their grip cracks in too many places at once, then their hold on power will fail.  Their entire paradigm will fall to earth and shatter into a million pieces.”

 

“I understand your philosophy and I agree with it,” Said Daniel, “but I’m interested in the actual methods on how we’re supposed to accomplish this.  We don’t have enough people here to fight a war.  How do we do this?”

 

“We don’t fight a war,” answered Josiah.  “We outlast them.  We just have to survive and advance farther down the timeline than they can.  I know we can’t go head to head with a larger group which possesses modern weapons.  I know we can’t take shots with a rifle at a tank or a helicopter gunship and make any real difference.  Guns aren’t going to solve this for us.  No weapon in the world is going to fix this situation over the long run.  It’s too big now for all of that.”

 

“Well now I’m confused,” said Daniel,”since you’re the one who led me into the tavern and prepared us for an execution.  You didn’t have a problem with me shooting more of them again on my own.”

 

“So far everything has been within our capability,” said Josiah.  “The symbolism of those things was also necessary both for the people here and to the outsiders, both to enemies and potential allies alike.  However, that would be getting philosophical again.”

 

“Yes, thanks for sparing me that,” said Daniel who was still exhausted and his tone hinted he was tiring of the lecture.  “You mentioned survival.  I really am more interested in things like food and fuel, beans and bullets, and all that.  I have a wife and child I’m responsible for.  We still need concrete things to live and words aren’t going to plant crops and feed us. 

 

“The first thing that happened after the shooting at Browning’s was all the people at the market got word about it, ran across the road and bought all the fuel they could.  It didn’t take long before it got relayed out by radio net and some people were driving in for some more.  The troopers put the ration flag up for a while before they closed the gate and the station completely.  The troopers cited a state emergency order and kept the remaining fuel in reserve for themselves.”

 

“We weren’t going to get another fuel truck up here,” said Josiah.  “That was a given sooner rather than later even if the shootings had never happened.”

 

“We could still use more gasoline,” said Daniel,” especially for the snow mobiles now and the four wheelers come spring.  Especially if we’re talking about hit and run guerilla stuff or just fleeing and moving people deeper into the woods in a hurry.”

 

“We’ll buy the gasoline from the people at the market,” said Josiah.  “Most of them don’t even have reliable vehicles anymore.  They’re really looking to make a buck and they’ll resell at higher prices.  However, gasoline should never be something we rely upon for the long-term.”

 

“We’re going to get gouged,” said Daniel.  “Unless you’ve got a ton of gold hidden somewhere I don’t know about.”

 

“I don’t have any left,” said Josiah.  “None.  Don’t believe the rumors.  It’s been gone for years.  The gold really is in the ground now.  Danny, we’re going to do what other people have done for centuries when they don’t have oil or gold and need one or the other, or both.”

 

After Josiah was purposely silent for a few seconds Daniel asked “Ok, what? Steal it?  You’re keeping me in suspense, what?”

 

“We’re going to sell weapons and ammunition to the people who have the gasoline,” replied Josiah. 

 

“Are you kidding me?” asked Daniel.

 

“Not at all,” answered Josiah.  “Think about this.  There’s a bunch of scared people sitting on gasoline who can’t use all of it for themselves.  Most of the people with vehicles who show up will have nothing of real value to trade other than their own food.  They’re not stupid and will really hold onto their food rather than burn it up.  But like us, both of those groups either have nowhere to go or really do feel this is their home. 

 

“While you were sleeping last night your cousins were already back over there making deals.  By the way, smart thinking on your part by having the Frenchmen take the snowmobiles back while you and Jeremiah scavenged off the gray men.  I only wish they had filled up their gas tanks at the station first.  It would’ve saved us a step.”

 

“Browning also siphoned first for what he needed for his patrol vehicle,” said Daniel.  “I can’t blame him.  He rushed his wife out of the house and they left for Grayling.  He only took a rifle and handgun with him.  But, if you’re looking at more fighting around here, why should we get rid of some of the guns and ammo that we already have?  We might need them all later.”

 

“Take a lesson from Browning,” stated Josiah.  “We have many more guns than family members here and more ammo than we could all carry together.  We may not want to leave the larger land, but we can’t stay in one small fixed spot either.  Likewise, although this may be a long struggle, we will not engage in any long battles.  But, this is the most important thing that history has shown me: when there is war and in the places where the fighting happens, there is never a shortage of weapons and ammunition.  Right now most of the people at the market don’t know that this will become the place of fighting.  We will all be swimming in guns, ammo, and blood.  There will be more than enough of that for everyone after a while.  On the other hand the fuel we need in the short-term will always be in short supply.”

 

*           *           *

 

“Everyone here should have had a chance to see the video by now.  Is there anyone here who hasn’t seen it?”  Asked the Chairman as he looked around the conference room and didn’t see any hands go up.  “When we adjourned yesterday I asked all of you to do some creative thinking outside of the box in order to address this problem.  I know the images we saw were quite disturbing for everyone, but I don’t want us to overreact either.  Our grip on things is very tenuous right now.  The last thing I want to do is escalate a situation and have it expand outside our manageable boundaries.  We can’t let this spin out of our control.  Ok, so how about some initial thoughts, anyone?”

 

“I know no one else here wanted to hear this yesterday,” began Gilbert, “but we need to go in with enough force now in order to completely overwhelm these terrorists.  Right now they’re a small group.  Letting them sit there for any length of time is going to give them a chance for momentum and allow for their potential support to spread.”

 

“You’re making it sound like this was some sort of organized group with support across a wide community,” said David.  “It looked like a few angry peons armed with little more than pitchforks doing a lynching rather than a popular mass uprising to me.  All that was missing in the video was nighttime and torches.”

 

“Do we know who these people are?” asked the Chairman.  “Who were the ringleaders?  What kind of information did the French give us?”

 

“Nothing from the French directly,” said the frail man.  “We did our own translation of the entire news report and the additional online content that was posted on their website.  It appears to be mainly one family that was involved –the ringleader was Josiah Shroud.  He’s no one of past virtual, media, or government significance.  He has no outside electronic connections that we know of.  Most of the people onsite when it happened were named as part of the extended Shroud family and none of them have an electronic presence either.  It was alleged this incident was a local reaction to a mod op gone bad.  People killed during the mod op were family members of the Shrouds.  Local law enforcement appeared unable or unwilling to assist the first team or otherwise control this one family’s reaction.  I need to note that we lost contact with three of our other teams that went to the same area after they lost contact with the first team in the video.”

 

“We’ve lost four teams there already…” began Gilbert before the Chairman quickly raised a hand to silence him.

 

“Who are these Shrouds?” asked the Chairman.  “I need to know more about them.  Who has their profiles?”

 

“They’re a bit of a mystery,” said Cass.  “Josiah Shroud has some kind of long ongoing property tax problem with the state.  We also found him and some other family members in a file from the Citizens Energy Security program when they tried to apply as a citizen’s union.  They’re farmers so the pitchfork and torch analogy isn’t too far off.  They were rejected by the feds in the hope of quickly assigning their property to the wildlife habitat zone.  I have addresses and GPS’s on Josiah Shroud’s home and many of the others in the area from the original file.  The satellite maps in it are about a decade old, though.  We’re still working on complete psychological and social profiles on all of them.  It’s taking time to go through the back-up archives.”

 

“I can email a current map,” said the frail man.  “The whole area is blanketed in snow and it’s fairly easy to see homes and people moving around outside this time of year.”

 

“That makes my point,” interjected Gilbert.  “If we get our people up there now in sufficient numbers, we can track down every last one of them.  There would be no escape.”

 

“Fine,” said the Chairman loudly.  “I’ll entertain this line of thinking again even though I thought the group had broadly ruled against it yesterday.  Go ahead.  I’ll give you another chance to make your case.”

 

“We’re looking at less than ten households scattered across a few miles,” said Gilbert as he looked at the other people on the Committee sitting around the large box of tables.  “All we need to do is send in twenty armored security vehicles plus support vehicles and smash this resistance now.  We could easily drop all the ASVs and humvees by C-17s up in that part of the state.  We could have the entire force fully massed and rolling on their homes within hours today.  If they’re forced from their homes in winter, they’ll have no where to go.  They’ll freeze or starve.  The weather can be our ally and their enemy.”

 

“That’s too many ASVs,” said David.  “I know we agreed those ASVs were going to be equal assets for both internal and external force, and although I thank you for your support on this internal security matter, we might have more internal or external concerns elsewhere in the future.”

 

“With what’s still going on out on the East Coast,” began Cass, “I don’t think I could get the Air Force to comply with dropping that much military equipment in northern Michigan anyway.  They’re going to wonder why we want them to do that rather than continue running humanitarian aid and evacuation flights.  That’s too many questions.  I don’t need a general asking to speak directly with the President.”

 

“I agree,” added the Chairman.  “The last thing we need right now are too many questions from outsiders.”

 

“Then we just tell them there are terrorists who’ve taken advantage of the situation out on the East Coast,” countered Gilbert.  “We’ve got these people on video.  I don’t understand why we’re not using that video right now to our advantage.  We can put any story we want with it and feed it back to the people as pabulum.  Give the President one more sound bite to spoon feed it to them.”

 

“We need to keep this situation and the President out of the media,” said the Chairman.  “There have been some other isolated areas where people resisted the mod teams –less than this one, of course— but I really think this would only add to that escalation of resistance elsewhere.  We can’t afford that right now.  On a positive note the way things are playing out now about the East Coast, the President is really losing all credibility.  I don’t want to do anything which gives him back a bounce.”

 

“Although we didn’t lose significant material assets,” said Stacey, “in this one place alone, we did lose some significant assets in personnel.  None of these guys were cannon fodder.  I’ve look at the files and they were experienced operators.  They were to take lead until David’s new recruits arrived and enforced the no-go zone.”

 

“They were also joint assets I might add,” said Gilbert.  “That’s what I tried to point out yesterday about how they were wasted.  While people are belittling me about the troubles along the edges of our territory, I lose valuable tools on temporary assignment to manage internal trailer trash.  They were to be part of the spear point in our coming battles on two different fronts; one with the nationalists and the other with the states west of the Mississippi who are still leaning independent.  The Fascists are also moving into Arkansas right now.  I don’t think I need to re-emphasize again how totally f-cked we’re going to be if the Fascists and Nationalists make a pact together and come united against us.”

 

“No one here is getting f-cked,” said the Chairman loudly. 

 

“Are you sure,” stated Gilbert just as loudly while looking straight at the Chairman and the usually constant typing by the frail man came to a stop.

 

“Thanks for your opinion, Gilbert,” said David as he broke the moment of silence in the room as the spark of anger began to publicly smolder between the two other men.  “But, internal security really is my responsibility.  I also have to agree with Stacey that we all have to be careful about how valuable assets are used.  Gilbert, it was a loss for both of us yesterday.  That’s why I don’t want to commit too many ASVs to this.  I think we can all agree that we need to be careful right now.  I think the job can be done with less than what you’re recommending.  I’m seeing some really good things with the new volunteers and I’m getting good reports from their trainers.”

 

“We had the officer cadre show some select closed groups the video yesterday as well,” stated Cass.  “The follow-up focus groups showed some really good motivation had been generated.”

 

“I wasn’t aware that this was done,” said Gilbert as he looked back over at the Chairman.

 

“It was just some red tab guys,” said the Chairman without looking at Gilbert.  “None of yours.  Remember this is an internal security matter.”

 

“I think this would be a great opportunity for the new volunteers to show what they can do,” said David.  “I know we can keep the ASVs and the experienced operators on this mission to the minimum.  This matter is in our backyard and they don’t have that far to go to take care of it.”

 

“I’ve seen some of those ASVs out in front of our building,” said the Chairman.  “It looks like they have a lot of firepower and can haul a lot of people around.  We’re really just looking at a handful of civilians in the woods with some shotguns, right?  I’ll bet four of those ASVs could get the job done.”

 

“Um…” began Gilbert.

 

“Yes,” said David.  “I’m sure four ASVs will be fine.  We’ll add a few support vehicles.  Some humvees and a fuel truck will also be needed for a ground convoy.  I can tell you a few rounds from just one ASV’s grenade launcher can level an entire house.”

 

“I’d bet that would look pretty cool on video,” said the Chairman with a smile.  “Make sure someone takes video of this little hunting expedition in the woods.  There will be a time when such a televised victory on the news or even quietly leaked to send a message elsewhere could be very helpful.  But, I’d just like to see some action like that anyway.”

 

“Boys and their guns,” Stacey said.  ”Even if we had the local capability to produce more of those grenades, which we don’t, those rounds would still cost a hundred times more than bullets.”

 

“I’d just rather we not use the grenade launchers at all,” said the frail man as he typed.  “That kind of thing is going to show up on the screens of third parties.”

 

“How?” asked the Chairman.  “Who?”

 

“I’d rather not say here,” answered the frail man.  “Not everyone here has the clearance to know either the how or who part.”

 

“When did that happen?” said a man at the far corner of the box who was usually silent during the meetings.

 

“I’m sorry I didn’t get a chance to go over this with everyone here yesterday,” said the Chairman as some murmuring arose among the far side of the box.  “Given the circumstances in Michigan, I was forced to issue a Chair Order which has temporarily restricted access to certain types of security information at all levels.  I have to stress that this is just a temporary order during this particular emergency.  It’s temporary.”

 

“Is this why I can’t logon to the red system?” asked a female who was also usually silent in the meetings, but had often expressed herself through emails to the entire group for years.

 

“I’m sorry,” said the Chairman in his most personable tone.  “I thought I had CCed everyone in advance regarding some of these temporary adjustments.”

 

“I never got any notice of this,” said the same female before asking “Did you click your email as local or encrypted?”

 

“It was sensitive,” answered the frail man before the Chairman could speak,”therefore, I re-routed it as encrypted which automatically dropped it into the red system.”

 

“I can’t get that email if I can’t logon to that system in the first place,” stated the female.  “How can I do my job if my access is restricted from the entire red system?”

 

“We can adjust this on a case by case basis so it doesn’t hinder jobs or impede our overall goals as a group,” said the Chairman as he looked around the room and then made eye contact with the woman who asked the questions.  “Meet me afterwards and I can look into this for you.”

 

*           *           *

 

“I want to thank everyone in advance for coming today,” stated Josiah to the group which had gathered and packed the inside of the pole barn.  “In a little while some of us are going to go over and bring Judy and the others back this way for the funeral.  The rest of the day we all need to focus on that.  We need to have our time to mourn.  However, right now, I need to say some things of concern to the living.  You need to hear this now because the future is coming fast at all of us.”

 

Josiah paused and looked around the large single room.  His wide gaze caught everyone including people at the back.  In the passive interior light provided by semi-transparent vinyl sheets spaced apart along the upper walls between sections of sheet metal, he saw a teenage boy sitting on a tractor and some other young men and women standing on the tractor’s dismounted implements along the far wall which included a brush hog mower and front loading bucket.  He cleared his throat.

 

“I know you guys will think this is funny coming from me, but I’ll try to keep this short and to the point today,” Josiah began hoping the stated contrast to his common lengthy speeches would have added a moment of lightness to a room of family, friends, and acquaintances from around the area who had known him for many years.  Although he felt more awkward when his opening was met by continued heavy silence, he didn’t show it outwardly and stated “There is a war that has been brought to us.  We didn’t ask for it and none of us here wanted it.  But we should make no mistake about the intentions of those who have shed first blood.  More men like those who killed Frank, Jim, Beth, and Lilly will be coming.  They’ve already shown us how they would treat unarmed men, women and children.  If you choose to stay here, then expect no mercy from them when they come.  This should already be clear to you.

 

“Some of you might want to leave the area.  Your feeling of fear is normal and human.  You might even think that by leaving now you’ll be avoiding more risk.  However, I doubt you will escape things for long.  It will catch up to you again in a new place elsewhere.  You will be alone there when that happens.  Others here might already be determined to stay, but think they will just lay low with just their own family.  Well, I say again that we have already seen what will happen to them when they are isolated and just trying to go about their own lives.  But, I know there are always people willing to stand and fight and there is always more strength in numbers rather than going it alone.  I know such people live here.  So I would ask if you intend to stay here and take a stand against these outsiders that we stand together.  That’s all I have to say about this for now.  Those of you who would like to talk with me more, can come by later and see me.  My door is always open to you.  Thanks again to everyone for listening.”

 

*           *           *

 

John stood with a handful of other camo men outside of a small house set in the side of a hill.  The treed ridgelines of taller mountains rose and stretched from one end of the horizon to the other across the lower field in front of them.  Two of the men smoked cigarettes as the others stood with their hands in their pockets to keep warm. 

 

“We’re not getting anywhere with these guys,” said one of the men referencing the two tan-clad prisoners separated in different rooms back inside the house.  “They’re still play-acting like we’re local militia and trying to maintain the cover that they’re feds.  I’ve already confronted them about their ID dates and their lack of history in the system.  They’ve received some formal training, but they don’t smell military to me.”

 

“Are they foreign?” asked one of the men.

 

“No,” answered another man wearing glasses as John listened with his arms crossed.  “I haven’t received the DNA tests back yet, but I’m not seeing anything behaviorally or linguistically from them to indicate that.  I’m fairly certain they’re both Americans.” 

 

“They’ve been zip-tied most of the time,” said one man with a cigarette still in his mouth which wiggled up and down as he talked.  “I’d like to know what kind of behavioral clues you can gather from that.  Did you closely analyze how they held their d-cks when they p-ssed?”

 

There was some laughter from the group except for John who looked back towards the mountains.  The first man who spoke began again “I’d like to move them somewhere brick and mortar and more official looking.  I have a feeling they’ve trained on this very scenario and they’re still in game mode.  I need that removed and then see how they adapt.  I want to test their comfort level.  These guys might have grown up in the Governor’s youth camp.”

 

“Let’s not assume things,” said John.  “I know things were exciting for everyone yesterday, but let’s not build this into a big catch too early.  You can continue working these guys, but we can’t lose focus on the bigger fish.  Mond and his people got away from us.  We don’t know where he is right now and we have no leads.  We were just lucky enough to capture these guys.  Murphy’s team did take some casualties when we tightened the vice.  We’ll take these two back to Scott.  He’ll want some answers from them.”

 

“They’re useless f-cking weight,” said the same man with the cigarette after he removed it and tapped off some ash.  “They have nothing useful to give us just like we’d have nothing really useful to say to them if things were reversed.  You have some more bullets in that first pistol mag.  Why don’t you use a couple more on them?”

 

“I guess I’m saving those for someone special,” said John.

 

“No use saving it for someone special now,” said the man,”your cherry’s been broken.”

 

“Why is it you always have to out goatee everyone?” asked John.

 

“This is already a great f-cking party and it’s not even midnight yet,” answered the man.  “This sh-t is just beginning.” 

 

Before John could say anything else, his satellite phone rang in his jacket and he immediately put it to his ear.

 

“Hello, Scott” answered John who then listened without saying a word for nearly two minutes as the other men had side conversations.  John then returned the phone to his pocket.

 

“Gentlemen…” began John.

 

“Gentlemen?” parroted the cigarette man in a humorous tone which the group ignored.  “Who’s that?”

 

“Gentleman,” reiterated John as he glanced at the man and continued “We have a new mission.”

 

End of Part 9

 

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